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sexycereal:
veronicamarsfic
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Veronica Mars Fiction
Monday, April 17th, 2006 09:30 pm
Fic: Boy, Oh, Boy (Logan, Veronica, Lilly, Duncan) PG

Title: Boy, Oh, Boy
Author: Sorcha
Pairing/Character: Logan, Veronica, Duncan, Lilly
Word Count: 1339
Rating: PG
Summary: Logan and Veronica's first meeting
Spoilers: None really.
Warnings: None.

"You're sitting on my sweater."

"Huh?" Logan looked up to see a petite blonde standing over him. Her hair was twisted up into pigtails, and her tiny, green shorts gave way to mud-caked knees.

"My sweater," she repeated. "You're using it as a cushion, could I get it?"

Logan's gaze hit his behind, falling on the green slip of cloth beneath it. He jumped up, proffering the sweater to the girl. "Oh, right. Sorry."

"Are you new here?" she asked, pulling the top on over her t-shirt.

"Kinda."

She frowned a little, small crease lines appearing on her forehead. "Kinda, how?"

"I'm new," he admitted.

She smirked, sweater now on properly. "Right. Well, I'm Veronica. It's nice to meet you...?"

"Logan."

"Logan," she repeated with a nod. "I should get back to the game, but I'll see you around."

"Yeah, definitely." He smiled.

Veronica returned the gesture before darting back to the soccer field, sneakers kicking up dirt on her way.

****


Before Logan could take a seat again Duncan arrive behind him. "Hey, man, were you just talking to Veronica?"

His gaze remained trained on the path Veronica had taken as he replied, "That's what she said her name was." Finally he turned to the other boy. "You know her?"

"Lilly's best friend," Duncan explained. "She's awesome."

Logan laughed, his mouth curving into a knowing grin. "Oh dude, do not tell me you have it bad for the best friend. Clichés abound."

"She's cute." Duncan blushed.

Logan countered, "She's hot."

"I'm thinking about asking her out this week," he admitted, trying to rid the red from his cheeks.

Logan nodded, trying not to let his eyes wander back to where Veronica had been. "Yeah, man, go for it. Nothing to lose and everything to gain," he leered.

"God, Logan." Duncan looked across at him, shocked. "She's not like that."

"Sure she's not. Come on, D, this is Lilly's best friend. Girl's got to be a little whack," he argued.

"She's sweet."

"I'll bet she is." Logan raised one eyebrow pointedly, making Duncan laugh.

"You're sick, man."

****


"Hey, Logan." Lilly sauntered over to where Logan was sitting alone, waiting for Duncan's own soccer game to end.

"Lilly," he acknowledged.

Veronica popped up from behind her friend, looking between the two. "You guys know each other?"

"Oh yeah," Lilly made a big show of their introduction, "Veronica this is Logan, Duncan's best friend from LA. He just moved here."

"We're acquainted." Logan smirked.

"Yeah. He was bogarting my sweater at half-time."

Lilly eyed the pair suspiciously before adding to Logan, "I always knew you guys were into cross-dressing. Totally explains were all my panties have gone."

Veronica blushed.

Lilly ignored her best friend's sensibilities as she continued, "So, Logan. Are you gonna be at our house later? Me and Miss V were thinking of having a little celebration since we just totally kicked Pan's butt."

"Well I don't know, Lilly." He grinned, trying to stay nonchalant. "Is anyone interesting going to be there?"

"Hah. We'll see you later loser." Lilly grabbed Veronica's hand, dragging her away from the bleachers.

He called after them, deliberately, "Bye, Veronica."

Veronica turned, her hand still clasped in Lilly's to shout back, "See you, Logan."

****


"He's so in love with me," Lilly proclaimed as they reached her dad's SUV.

Veronica sighed, rolling her eyes. "Everyone's in love with you, Lilly. And we can't party tonight, my dad wants me home for a family dinner."

"No fair." Lilly pouted. "You're gonna miss out on all the fun."

Veronica snorted. "Oh sure, cause it'll be fun watching the new guy drool all over you."

"You could talk to Duncan." Lilly gave Veronica a look, trying to coax her into an appearance.

Veronica just twisted her mouth up like Lilly was stupid. "Duncan doesn't have anything to say to me. He just kind... stares."

"That's cause he's a total moron. But come on, Veronica. You totally have to meet Logan properly, he's really not as much of a loser as you'd think."

"I can't Lil, sorry."

"Fine." She sighed, disappointed. "Party pooper."

****


Logan walked into Lilly almost as soon as he was inside the Kane house. People were milling about in a miniature party atmosphere but her best friend did not seem to be attached to Lilly as promised. "Where's Veronica?"

"Oh, she couldn't make it." Lilly flipped her hair, leaning back a little to strain her developing breasts tight against her t-shirt. "Something about family time, blah blah blah." She leaned forward conspiratorially. "You know her dad's the Sheriff. He could like totally shoot someone and get away with it."

He raised an eyebrow questioning the information. "Good to know."

"Not that he, like, would. But he could, that's so cool. Way cooler than my dad, he just, like, geeks out with computers."

"Hey," Logan shrugged, "at least he doesn't make you sit through crappy interviews with E!"

Lilly's face broke out into a grin as she batted a hand off Logan's arm. "Like you totally don't love the attention. It would be so rock to be on TV!"

"Oh yeah, it's the best," he drawled.

She shook her head, smiling widely at him. "You're so weird."

"Great," Logan replied with disinterest. "You seen Duncan around?"

"He was in the kitchen, like, ten minutes ago," she finished as he pushed off the table he was leaning against and went in search of Duncan.

****


Logan moved around the corner as Duncan closed the fridge, now brandishing a soda. "So, no Veronica. I guess the big question won't be popped tonight."

"Hey, man." He turned back to the fridge, grabbing another can for Logan. "No she got stuck with her dad or something."

"Yeah, Lilly told me." He nodded, cracking the seal on his soda.

Duncan's expression curled up into curiosity. "You were looking for Veronica?"

Logan hardly floundered for words as he replied, "Hey, I just wanted a heads up on whether or not I was gonna interrupt you guys."

"Oh, right." Duncan nodded awkwardly. "Well, no."

"Cool."

"So, you wanna hit the Playstation."

"Sounds like a plan."

****


"Hey, Veronica, right?" Logan called as a blur of blonde brushed past him.

The girl in question spun back to face him and once she realised who it was she gave him a small smile. "So you remembered."

He grinned back. "I never forget a pretty girl."

Veronica laughed. "Don't let Lilly hear you say that."

He shot her an incredulous look, joking, "She gonna get out the magic mirror, check she's still the fairest of them all?"

"Don't underestimate Lilly Kane."

"Oh, I would never. So, where you headed in such a hurry."

Veronica's gaze darted down to the books in her hands before lifting once more to meet Logan's. "I've got English next, it's on the other side of the school."

"Hey," he stopped her, "Mr. Murton?"

"Yeah," she answered hesitatingly, suspicion running through her tone.

"Snap." He moved into step beside her. "I think you just found yourself a study buddy, Miss Mars."

"Most excellent," she smiled. Nudging him in the arm she asked, "You wanna do my homework for Tuesday?"

"Pfft. I'm milking the move for all the homework excuses it's worth."

"Right. So, why'd you move to Neptune anyway? Your dad's Aaron Echolls, wouldn't it make more sense for him to live where the movies are made?"

He shrugged noncommittally. "Most of them are shot on location anyway. My mom wanted to get away from the cameras."

"Oh."

Logan smirked, framing his face with his hands dramatically. "Yeah, making sure I look pretty every morning is such a burden!"

"Oh, I'm sure," she responded dryly.

"Hey," he protested, "this hair doesn't gel itself."

"And the greasy look is so in right now."

"You minx. Well," he looked up at the door to their classroom, "time to face the music. After you."

"And a gentleman too." She grinned, ducking around him to head inside. Class was definitely going to be interesting.

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bklyangel
bklyangel
shut your dirty whore mouth, player player!
Monday, April 17th, 2006 01:47 pm (UTC)

Awwww
Please make this like a series...or a series of sequals....please pretty please!!!! I'll build you a shrine.


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:22 pm (UTC)

Hee. It would end up so fluffy and I wouldn't be able to keep myself from having Logan and V hooking up. It would just HAPPEN.

But that damn shrine is so tempting!


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everything_inme
everything_inme
Sam
Monday, April 17th, 2006 01:55 pm (UTC)

"Sure she's not. Come on, D, this is Lilly's best friend. Girl's got to be a little whack," he argued.

HaHA. Damn. That's ... extremely entertaining. I could totally hear Logan saying that in my head, too. Props for that, and:

He grinned back. "I never forget a pretty girl."

LOVED that. This was a nice look at who they were when they first met. And your Lilly was, as usual, perfect. Going in my memories. ♥.


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:23 pm (UTC)

Thank you! It's always fun writing a little Lilly. I just couldn't resist putting her in there.


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iwillrememberu
iwillrememberu
iwillrememberu
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:00 pm (UTC)

So very darn cute. How I wished something had happened pre-Lilly's death.


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:23 pm (UTC)

Thank you! Wouldn't it have been fun?!


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havemy_heart
havemy_heart
Shane
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:00 pm (UTC)

Is there gonna be more? Because there really should be. I ♥ pre-series fics, and this was adorable. Reading things like this makes me wish that Logan and Veronica had hooked up way back then and just avoided the messy Kanes altogether. Great job :-)


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:24 pm (UTC)

Thank you! Just a little bit I wish they had too, but I think that's too much badfic speaking. I don't have anymore planned but who knows, I have a tendancy of saying I won't write anymore and then hammering out some anyway!


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genova
genova
Cara
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:16 pm (UTC)

"Way cooler than my dad, he just, like, geeks out with computers."

I laughed at that, it's so Lilly. I love pre-series fics, and there aren't enough well-written ones. I like how your Veronica is a little snarky, but there's also that innocence mixed in. I like to think that she wasn't completely meek back then, but that Lilly's murder and her ensuing ostracization were just what brought out her toughness. Oh, and Logan definitely had a little crush on V, I like how you got that across.


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:26 pm (UTC)

Thank you! I always thought that V had that little bit of snark in her all along. I mean from the "while I take pictures of you yakking in your living room" line we saw in one of the flashbacks. She was cool.


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sadiekate
sadiekate
sadiekate
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:45 pm (UTC)

Aww, damn. I needed something a little sweet because I am having sort of a sucky day, and this totally fit the bill. I feel like I have puppies crawling all over me, it was so cute, but it still managed to be a bit snarky and very in-character, too. Thanks, dude.


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 02:51 pm (UTC)

Aw, I'm glad it could cheer you up a little. At least three other people and myself have had shitty days today as well -- must be something in the water.


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sitebuilderchic
Melissa
Monday, April 17th, 2006 03:19 pm (UTC)

please make a series! this so sooo good! i ♥ LoVe!


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 04:04 pm (UTC)

Hee, it would be a lot of fun if I had the patience to continue it!


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immortal_teacup
immortal_teacup
a city in the dark
Monday, April 17th, 2006 03:40 pm (UTC)

this was the cutest thing ever. and you must continue with it. seriously. :)


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 04:05 pm (UTC)

Thank you! I will most definitely consider it after I've written all the other stuff I have in the works!


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fortunate_acdnt
fortunate_acdnt
Nina-Marie
Monday, April 17th, 2006 04:05 pm (UTC)

i agree with the people of above... you NEED to continue this for your sanity and mine, hee. :)


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 04:06 pm (UTC)

OMG how much do I love your icon? Hee. And thank you, it was so much fun just to write this little bit.


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mishane
mishane
mishane
Monday, April 17th, 2006 04:30 pm (UTC)

You wrote pre-series adolescent fic! Yes, my secret love. I loved it. Just loved it. Thank you so much! I really hope you continue it because its so good to read some well written fluff instead of angst...or badly written fluff. Can't wait to see where you go with this.


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 09:57 pm (UTC)

I did! I'm glad you enjoyed it, it was a lot more fun to write than I had assumed. I'm really considering continuing but right this second I have so much to write that it'll probably have to hang tight for a second.


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thatmarsgirl
thatmarsgirl
you've joined the ranks.
Monday, April 17th, 2006 05:10 pm (UTC)

The girl in question spun back to face him and once she realised who it was she gave him a small smile. "So you remembered."

He grinned back. "I never forget a pretty girl."


This just seemed so innocent and sweet, it just caught my eye and I loved it. ♥


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 09:57 pm (UTC)

Aw, thank you. It was a little sickly but I have a feeling Logan's always been an utter sleaze in a sweet kinda way. Hee.


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wildly_wrathful
wildly_wrathful
Meghan
Monday, April 17th, 2006 05:29 pm (UTC)

Please tell me there is more to this!! PLEASE!! I love pre-series LoVe fics! And it's different from any I've read before. More!?!?!


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 09:58 pm (UTC)

Ah! Thank you. There's not anymore... yet. I'm really glad that you think it's different from other pre-series fics with them because some of them are just so awful.


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pumpkins_n_pups
pumpkins_n_pups
Ashley
Monday, April 17th, 2006 05:49 pm (UTC)

Add another vote for a series. Pre-series fluff with lots of Logan/Veronica flirting? We can never have too much of that in our world.


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:00 pm (UTC)

This is true. Although I'm still not entirely convinced over the whole pre-series hook up. They could have been so, so wrong for each other at that point. Who knows! But thank you, I'm glad you liked it so much.


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dreamoflove86
Amber
Monday, April 17th, 2006 05:59 pm (UTC)

This was so cute! I'm gonna hop on the bandwagon along with everyone else and vote for more, if you, ya know, feel like writing it! I love Pre-Kane fic!

*And exclamation points apparently.*


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:06 pm (UTC)

Aw, thank you. The exclamation points are appreciated.


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fifteen12
Dee
Monday, April 17th, 2006 06:11 pm (UTC)

Cuuute! I always wanted to read a fic about how they met!

He grinned back. "I never forget a pretty girl."

I loved this cuz is so what Logan would say!


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:07 pm (UTC)

Hah, thank you. I'm glad you liked!


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jacedesbff
jacedesbff
Hufflepuff Forever!
Monday, April 17th, 2006 06:51 pm (UTC)

I so adore middle school fic! I completely cop to being biased, but I just love seeing them at that age! And fabulous characterizations. Woo-hoo! And yay!


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:10 pm (UTC)

Thank you. I'm not usually so much a fan of the pre-series, it tends to bore me a little despite how much I love the Fab Four but this was fun to tackle.


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yoyotan
yoyotan
The Bard
Monday, April 17th, 2006 08:53 pm (UTC)

love. that's all I gotta say.
(i'm on my suppa secrit alter LJ!)
cheers.
--Lex


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:11 pm (UTC)

Oh you're so covert ops! But thanks for the feedback, I love to know if people are enjoying!


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girlcontinuum
Clumsy Clara
Monday, April 17th, 2006 09:22 pm (UTC)

I love how cute this is. It's so strange, these 4 being adorable kids, and then you realize they all already have so much trauma, even if they don't know about it yet. It's a new way of seeing them.

I also love that you fanwanked Duncan and Logan knowing each other since kindergarten when Logan only moved to Neptune when V was 12. That's what fic is for, isn't it?


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:13 pm (UTC)

Hah, I'm all about Logan having lived in LA before Neptune. It just MAKES SENSE. And also means that I can totally get around that horrible slip in canon which I refuse to believe is there.

And thank you! It is strange to see them all not-fucked-up. Who'd have known?!


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writteninstars
writteninstars
Crystal
Monday, April 17th, 2006 09:26 pm (UTC)

Soooo, love this a lot. Love the pre-series vibe between Logan and Veronica. You're so lovely. ♥


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:16 pm (UTC)

Thanks so much! I wanted to try and keep their vibe because from what we've seen Logan wasn't much different than he's always been with his friends and Veronica wasn't spineless either. They were just a little cuter and sweeter. A LITTLE.


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la623
la623
Lala
Monday, April 17th, 2006 09:27 pm (UTC)

LOL...this was really cute! I like that Lilly isn't getting the attention she wants from him. Will there be more? Please say there will be...you're fics are always so entertaining! :)


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:16 pm (UTC)

Thank you! Glad you liked it! I'm not sure if there'll be more but perhaps, there certainly seems to be the demand for it!


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brandyleigh
brandyleigh
Brandy
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:27 pm (UTC)

So cute and fluffy! I love pre-series fic, it's just so interesting to contemplate how good of friends Veronica and Logan were, or if Logan was ever interested in Veronica as more than a friend. Good stuff!


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Monday, April 17th, 2006 10:32 pm (UTC)

Thank you! I think he probably has a leeetle crush on her to start with but was mostly blindsided by Lilly. However it's definitely fun to think about the more platonic side with them, they couldn't have been that ANGRY with each other if they hadn't meant something to one another.


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_jems_
_jems_
Jennifer
Tuesday, April 18th, 2006 08:03 am (UTC)

Aw, they're so adorable and there's like miniature snark and everything. I can just picture an alternate universe where these two get together and Veronica hones her skills by trying to keep up with him, not combating him.

(P.S. Is it sad that I'm hoarding your December story for some time when I need a little pick-me-up? The saddest thing of all is that I'm bound to forget about it when I need it the most.)


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Tuesday, April 18th, 2006 08:09 am (UTC)

Oh dammit, why would you go and put wonderful V/L pre-series ideas into my head that could totally develop and be cute and angsty and snarky and eventually hot? That's not fair.

And aw, not sad. I am flattered. Although you must remember it because it is squishy... so I am told. Hee.


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drollicaeipathy
drollicaeipathy
drollicaeipathy
Tuesday, April 18th, 2006 08:09 am (UTC)

ooo! write a part two. pwwweaaase? it could always go au - with a little logan/veronica lovin' that would be suuperb!


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sexycereal
sexycereal
S
Tuesday, April 18th, 2006 08:10 am (UTC)

Aw, thank you, he'd so make her keep the soccer uniform.


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meggaaaasta
meggaaaasta
Tuesday, April 18th, 2006 08:49 am (UTC)
hi

please please please!!!!! tell ,me there`s more of this oh so wonderful story.


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moustrich
moustrich
Tuesday, April 18th, 2006 09:21 am (UTC)

Aww. This was adorable. I love pre-series fics and I really hope you do continue it. Great fic.


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